Sunday, April 24, 2011

vignette

1 comment:

  1. Jen-

    This piece has a nice mix of characters and environment, plus some details from your world. My main concerns is in knowing exactly what is going on in the scene. It looks like the woman is attacking the display, while also attacking the woman next to her at the same time? I think you are trtying to go for a scene of a few characters fighting over the remaining scraps of a sale, no? If so, I think you need to work on making that more obvious.

    Otherwise, I think this image is working well... good colors and details.

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